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Author: | SunRein [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Commentary: Maria In the Wild |
Here is where you guys can talk about whatever you want to say about the story. Stuff may include: - What you think of the story - What you want to see happen - Anything you do not understand - Ect ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Negative comments are welcome, I mean - A story teller has to be open to criticism, but just note that if you take it to far, you will not get to see the ending to the story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [Troll/Flame removed. Please observe forums rules. -Calan] |
Author: | =^_^= [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:46 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Commentary for: Maria In the Wild |
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Author: | Banana Pancakes [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:52 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Commentary for: Maria In the Wild |
Thank you, JB. [ You bet. -JB ] |
Author: | MoreThanThree [ Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:44 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Commentary: Maria In the Wild |
Quote: P.S: Kingsean12's negative comment's don't count. (Since I know he will leave them) Oh, okay then. Would you kindly fix the grammar?
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Author: | SunRein [ Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:17 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Commentary: Maria In the Wild |
Please reread Maria in the Wild and feedback for the first chapter. I have started the story over, because Maria looks like an idiot, getting lost in the woods as a Ravenclaw, so the new story is, she studies the animals. |
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